Dear homework, I really really hate you. You are really really annyin and I wish you had never been born. why do you keep torturing me with your power? I want to be free from you. you keep making me think ' what should I do?' or ' I might get a yellow card or a red card! What should I do?' and ' what would teacher say to me?'. Because of you, I keep gettin stressed and worried. Why can't you just disappear in studying world? Do you enjoy torturing torturing students?
I think you are just trying to be a teacher's pet. Almost all the teachers likes you and talks very very many things about you. I can't understandyou. My parents, teachers, and grownups says that yu are helpin me to get smarter, and improve many skills. But, (I'm not sorry for you) you are no help to me, and you only spoils my happy feelins. also, everybody I know hates and curses you. I somtimes gets punished because of you. I gets punished by my teacher just because I forgot about you.
Really, seriously, why did you born in the first place?
Because of you, I can't sleep! You always makes me dizzy and sleepy, makes my eyes half closed. I somtimes have to go to the second studying period at GLPS. If you don't exist, i would have been not sleepy and I can have more time to sleep. I wouldn't be stressed, wouldn't get punished and have more time to play and time to do my things. Also, you know what? I really hate you and you annoys me very much.
I can't understand you. Don't you wan't fame, get love, get popular? Or do you want to stay ugly, get hate from others, and listen to many curses that people says to you? Of course you would want the first thing. Ir is really easy. Just don't annoy us, and everyone would like you. You are no help to me, or anyone else. You are just like an ugly and bad monster who likes to torture many childrens and gets us into trouble.
This is end of my letter to you, and I really wish you would disappear forever!
I like this ode.^^ Actually, my mind is same with you!!:)
ReplyDeleteHi. Your writing TA Sohyeon here.
ReplyDeleteHmm. A very passionate ode. I like the way you try to cajole the homework into disappearing: "Don't you want to get love?" Homework, unfortunately, is a necessary evil.
I would like to see your argumentative essay as well.
Good writing and your grammar is actually very good. BUT you are not a careful typist, and many many little "annoying" (not annyin) errors are rampant throughout this ode. A little red line will show underneath if you look carefully. As well, be careful of that extra "s" at the end of some of your verbs. "Get" not "gets" etc.
ReplyDeleteGood content though. Homework is annoying and I, as a teacher, try not to give too much of it. I think you were so angry when you wrote this that you typed too quickly and made many errors.